Wednesday, May 03, 2006

A Story for HNT

She remembered their first kiss fondly. They had talked for weeks, spending hours at a time every night on the phone getting to know each other. He told her stories about growing up as a military brat. She described what it was like be the farmer’s daughter. They talked about past relationships…the things that had gone wrong, the mistakes that couldn’t be overcome. They knew each other well even though they had never met.

She waited nervously for him at the bar as she listened to a regular discuss politics with the bartender. She heard the door creak and knew it was him before she turned her head. She smiled. He was better looking in person than in the picture she had of him. Broad shoulders, dark hair and a warm smile. They talked more over dinner. His kids, her friends, their lives. When they parted ways, she wondered if she would ever see him again. Things seemed so different in person. The warmth they had developed over those long nights on the phone seemed to have given way to nervousness and fear.

When the phone rang later he asked to see her again. They sat in her garage and discussed their philosophies on life while rain soaked the ground. It was hot and muggy, like mid-summer nights are in the South. The stark coldness of the beer provided some relief. The warmth and ease of the conversation had returned. She felt at home with him. He asked about her favorite book and then about her favorite color. She was in the middle of her reply when he leaned in, placed his hand on the back of her head and kissed her. The quickness of his movements startled her. It wasn’t a hurried kiss but more of the type that couldn’t be held back any longer. Bodies pressed firmly together, drinking each other in. She could smell the spices in his cologne and taste the sweetness of his gum on her lips. Time seemed to stop at that moment. She hoped it would never start again.

12 Comments:

Blogger Lisa said...

That is a very sweet read. Phew, got me all hot and bothered....anticipation is the BEST thing, yeah?? lol

Lovely story...happy HNT to you my dear :)

3:28 AM  
Blogger xwy said...

Lisa - I know...I had to end it before I got all hot & bothered.

Glad to hear you're ok & that the tsunami was only 2ft tall!


heheheh...my word verification is feckc....seems that even blogger is stealing feck from Grant ;)

6:27 AM  
Blogger Stacy The Peanut Queen said...

Ooooo...I liked that!

Very nice! :)

7:29 AM  
Blogger Grant said...

Great story, but since you skimped on the nekkidness we're going to have to insist on FNT (full nekkid Thursday) for next week.

9:25 AM  
Blogger xwy said...

Christian - hehehe...had you on the edge of your seat, didn't I?Love the pic! Thanks for stopping by. ;)

Denny - More like a walk with an old memory...with a little embellishment thrown in.

9:25 AM  
Blogger xwy said...

Grant - Truthfully, [notice I didn't say honestly] someone dared me recently to write an erotic story. I tried but...well, it's been long enough *hangs head in shame* that no matter how many times I re-write it, it keeps sounding more like "why don't we get drunk and screw" than "let's get it on".

9:32 AM  
Blogger Monogram Queen said...

Hey why don't we get drunk and... works for some people :)
I'm a let's get it on kinda girl though.
Great story! Happy HNT

10:02 AM  
Blogger Stacy The Peanut Queen said...

I'm with Patti_cake on this one....and it's fiction, right? We can all get drunk and screw as long as it's fictional!!! ;)

11:50 AM  
Blogger xwy said...

Cakes & PQ - It's supposed to be fiction? Man, now I have to start all over. lol I'm more of a "let's get it on" girl. We'll see....maybe next week since it's been officially declared FNT

12:24 PM  
Blogger poet said...

great read, nice story. have a good thursday

3:50 PM  
Blogger Lisa said...

Who's getting drunk and screwing?? I want to get drunk and screw..*said in a whiney voice*

ok, you got me...I don't really want to get drunk. :-P

4:34 PM  
Blogger xwy said...

Poet - Thanks!

Lisa - I hear ya...momma needs some luvin!

Funny I thought the guys would run wild in the comments...turns out we're a bunch of dirty girls!!

5:45 PM  

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